Focus: How do we use our evidence to support our response topic sentence?
1. Warming up with the how and the why of our school
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2. Zooming into your photo and identifying your 2-3 pieces of evidence
- Ex: If my topic sentence is about the significance of the color red, what might I zoom in on in this painting?
- Ex: If my topic sentence is about celebrating the promising possibility of education, what might I zoom in on?
- Your turn: What two or three pieces of evidence in your photo best support your topic sentence?
3. Understanding the what, how, and why for each piece of evidence
The what: Identify what the piece of evidence is by describing it.
- The father holds not one but two hats in his weathered hands: his hat, as well as his son’s hat.
The how: Explain how the evidence reveals something important.
- Rockwell has painted the son’s hat over the father’s hat to reveal how the father has put his son’s needs above his own, and for this reason, the father is the true figure of courage in the painting.
The why: Explain why the evidence supports your response topic sentence / why the evidence is something we should all care about.
- While the father’s features may initially fade into the background of the photo, Rockwell paints him as an unsung hero of rural life.
4. Partnering you up by
photos and verbalizing your what, how and why to each other
5. Finishing the drafts of your paragraphs of response
*Giving you a heads-up: On Thursday, we will meet in the Forum for important information from the counselors.*
HW:
1. For TOMORROW: Finish your paragraph of response. Tomorrow will be our last day of in-class work time. Final drafts are due Tuesday, September 25.
2. On THURSDAY: Meet in the Forum.
3. For FRIDAY: Bring your independent reading books to class.